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NORWICH/CT
Joined: 04/24/07
Posts: 7805
January 2nd, 2008 - 10:49 PM

at least for a moment

i am nothing new
i am nothing old
i am nothing meak
i am nothing bold

My voice will long be remembered
My dreams and thoughts as well
I am not just one of a kind
I'm the bridge between heaven and hell.

....


he winter nights seem made of onyx
blacker than black in a dream
my heart feels made of diamonds
indestructible through time it would seem

i search through a fog to find him
and yet he is out of my reach
i'm content in my moment of thought
his love, though, do i beseech

my soul is light and awakened
my feet are ready to run
wherever my dream goes, i follow
if they can lead me... to the one



(i haven't written jack shit in forever, so even if this is shit, it's an accomplishment)



NORWICH/CT
Joined: 04/24/07
Posts: 7805
January 2nd, 2008 - 10:50 PM

he should be The*


ATHENS/AL
Joined: 11/09/07
Posts: 325
January 2nd, 2008 - 10:50 PM

Everywhere I look they are there... what is everyone doing?
Going to a home?
To a place that makes us feel warm... a place that grants us a smile.
Seems like a very simple idea, but not hardly figured out.
(looking everywhere)
I just see faces.
Faces staring blank as they go on with the routine.
This routine.
Nothing new... its time to go through with this.
A spaceman. That’s what they say I am. Nothing but a spaceman... always pushing it all away.
Trying to get to that one place I call home.
The journey begins... forcing a new life with the unexplained... a creeping rush that surrounds me.
Floating.... floating away.
Always pushing it all away. Trying to get to that one place I call home.
My own planet... I allowed this wish... unexpected... not knowing why.
Wonder why I question it now? I'm my own planet... not many can experience this sensation.
Loneliness is creeping out... or in, however you think of it.
But it sure is surrounding me. Maybe all the complaining is an accurance of boredom. I suppose it’s too late.
I am floating farther and farther away. I did love, I did laugh, I did live.
(Now I’m my own planet)
A spaceman. They say I am… a spaceman.
Planets everywhere... my own destiny… I’m floating towards the sun.
The sun of nothing. Floating towards the sun, the sun of nothing. I have become the sun of nothing.
Nothing is here. Memories are not clear.
Floating to the sun… farther away.
I can't believe that’s what it has come to... I never really had it all that bad.
I just looked around and never thought about the blank stares.
(Blank stairs)
They were looking into something much worse than what I thought I was.
Selfishness is a very sticky quality of this species. Looking around...
I don't see any faces... yes I am lonely. It’s to be expected. I’ll sleep now.
(Dream waves)



TALLAHASSEE/FL
Joined: 01/01/08
Posts: 23
January 2nd, 2008 - 11:05 PM

wow are any of you guys in bands my band my be interested in a song like this symphony


WINCHESTER/VA
Joined: 11/20/07
Posts: 3873
January 2nd, 2008 - 11:06 PM

i hate the word onyx. i dont know why.


but otherwise i really liked this part:

symphony Said:


i am nothing new
i am nothing old
i am nothing meak
i am nothing bold




NORWICH/CT
Joined: 04/24/07
Posts: 7805
January 2nd, 2008 - 11:10 PM

thanks :)

i suppose i could've used another word to compare to the blackness of winter lately, but i chose onyx as an opposite to diamond



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