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HOUSTON/TX
Joined: 02/23/08
Posts: 9

February 23rd, 2008 - 7:51 PM

So, here it goes, I'm writing a collection of short stories each about one of the seven deadly sins. Now I'm stuck in a rut cause I can't think of an idea sick enough for some of them. I want these stories to be deeply disturbing, almost along the lines of absurd. So I thought where else to find some sick bastards than here? If you have any ideas on how the sin could be committed, or the result of the sin being committed, please tell me about them thanks :)

(and to show you want I mean)
ENVY: a gender identity confused girl who doesn't come to terms with the fact that she wants to be a boy, is so envious of some popular asshole at school, stalks him and cuts off his penis and sews it to herself.

I know you guys can come up with some weird stuff. and in case your sunday school lessons need some refreshing
(the seven deadly sins)
Envy
Greed
Lust
Sloth
Gluttony
Wrath
Pride

MC-Hope

DUNELLEN/NJ
Joined: 02/15/08
Posts: 19

February 23rd, 2008 - 8:11 PM

Ignorance should be a sin.

christie_am

HOUSTON/TX
Joined: 02/23/08
Posts: 9

February 23rd, 2008 - 8:17 PM

well, - it's interesting seeing what people come up with and I never take their ideas but it helps me to look at things from a different angle
Brainstorming never hurt anyone.
I haven't been on MOC for a few years, so I decided to just come back on here. I used to talk to people on here about stuff like this and I got some pretty good ideas.
so long story short FORUM POSTING HELPS ME BRAINSTORM :)

CMRuiz

SEATTLE/WA
Joined: 04/24/07
Posts: 7621

February 23rd, 2008 - 8:20 PM

see:

Lacking

CEDAR RAPIDS/IA
Joined: 02/06/08
Posts: 391

February 23rd, 2008 - 8:23 PM

go to deathrow,
they can help

burning_monk

BRONX/NY
Joined: 04/24/07
Posts: 10915

February 23rd, 2008 - 8:25 PM

AND AT THE END BRAD PITT OPENS THE BOX AND HIS FUCKING WIFE'S HEAD IS IN IT!!! SO HE SHOOTS THE GUY AND THAT FULFILLS THE "WRATH" PORTION OF THE 7 DEADLY SINS!! BUT THE FUCKING GUY KNEW HE'D DO THAT!! SO IT WAS LIKE HE WON IN THE END ANYWAY!! AND MORGAN FREEMAN IS LIKE "WTF?! I GOT TINY SCARS ON MY FACE LIKE SEAL BUT NO ONE EVER TALKS ABOUT IT!!!" CRAZY!

i just wrote the ending for you

MC-Hope

DUNELLEN/NJ
Joined: 02/15/08
Posts: 19

February 23rd, 2008 - 8:25 PM

I see your point, but creative writing is about looking through yourself and seeing what YOU can come up with. Everyone's a little twisted inside. I'm sure you'll think of something; Just dig into that dark cramped corner of your brain where all the shit is.

christie_am

HOUSTON/TX
Joined: 02/23/08
Posts: 9

February 23rd, 2008 - 8:31 PM

AHAHAHA your allusion to some movie with a similar theme is hilarious, however did you guys get so clever?

thanks for all the great help guys! -__-

marriedpunker

NEW YORK/NY
Joined: 01/16/08
Posts: 653

February 23rd, 2008 - 8:33 PM

i am having trouble with my math homework.
a squared + b squared = c squared. but what about d's?
yeah what about deez nuts?

Lacking

CEDAR RAPIDS/IA
Joined: 02/06/08
Posts: 391

February 23rd, 2008 - 8:34 PM

burning_monk Said:

AND AT THE END BRAD PITT OPENS THE BOX AND HIS FUCKING WIFE'S HEAD IS IN IT!!! SO HE SHOOTS THE GUY AND THAT FULFILLS THE "WRATH" PORTION OF THE 7 DEADLY SINS!! BUT THE FUCKING GUY KNEW HE'D DO THAT!! SO IT WAS LIKE HE WON IN THE END ANYWAY!! AND MORGAN FREEMAN IS LIKE "WTF?! I GOT TINY SCARS ON MY FACE LIKE SEAL BUT NO ONE EVER TALKS ABOUT IT!!!" CRAZY!

i just wrote the ending for you

comedy.

robotsonbabylon

SUQUAMISH/WA
Joined: 11/10/07
Posts: 2461

February 23rd, 2008 - 8:35 PM

CHRISTIE, PLEASE POST 2 FORMS OF IDENTIFICATION, ONE FROM LIST A AND ONE FROM B. OR A PASSPORT. JUST SO I KNOW.

christie_am

HOUSTON/TX
Joined: 02/23/08
Posts: 9

February 23rd, 2008 - 8:39 PM

marriedpunker Said:

i am having trouble with my math homework.
a squared + b squared = c squared. but what about d's?
yeah what about deez nuts?

This isn't for some homework assignment, I'm writing for my own pleasure and run out of actual people I know to brainstorm with, so- this is my last resort.

gravytrain009

BROOKLYN/NY
Joined: 04/24/07
Posts: 4965

February 23rd, 2008 - 8:39 PM

I was gonna say go watch Se7en, but then I figured I'd wait and see if anyone else would say it funnier. Thanks for coming through for me, guys.

christie_am

HOUSTON/TX
Joined: 02/23/08
Posts: 9

February 23rd, 2008 - 8:44 PM

Is that all any one can ever think about? Is some shitty movie with a similar theme? jeeze people, it's almost about time to stop ragging on me for my apparent "lack of creativity" and look at yourselves. lordy lord.

burning_monk

BRONX/NY
Joined: 04/24/07
Posts: 10915

February 23rd, 2008 - 8:49 PM

my morgan freeman/seal connection was creative as fuck. idontevenwannahearit

Peachsalsa

DUMFRIES/VA
Joined: 02/18/08
Posts: 110

February 23rd, 2008 - 8:52 PM

without being sarcastic in any way, I'm just gonna agree with all the comments above. It's not a creative or innovative idea really; there's already a movie with the same theme. And not that I'm opposed to drawing inspiration from other people, but if you have to do around explicitly asking for ideas for a plotline, then you're not inspired enough yourself to write the story and should therefore find something else to write about.

robotsonbabylon

SUQUAMISH/WA
Joined: 11/10/07
Posts: 2461

February 23rd, 2008 - 8:53 PM

christie_am Said:

Is that all any one can ever think about? Is some shitty movie with a similar theme? jeeze people, it's almost about time to stop ragging on me for my apparent "lack of creativity" and look at yourselves. lordy lord.

WHY DONT YOU DO SOMETHING THAT HASN'T BEEN DONE?

christie_am

HOUSTON/TX
Joined: 02/23/08
Posts: 9

February 23rd, 2008 - 9:03 PM

robotsonbabylon Said:

christie_am Said:

Is that all any one can ever think about? Is some shitty movie with a similar theme? jeeze people, it's almost about time to stop ragging on me for my apparent "lack of creativity" and look at yourselves. lordy lord.

WHY DONT YOU DO SOMETHING THAT HASN'T BEEN DONE?

The 7 deadly sins have been around for awhile, I'm sorry if other people are interested in them too.
and isn't the point of that movie about a serial killer or something ? Thats not what I was going for

bleh. sorry I asked, I was expecting some shit but at least a good idea too.

laurenella

PHILADELPHIA/PA
Joined: 04/24/07
Posts: 2725

February 23rd, 2008 - 9:06 PM

if you sew a penis to yourself it doesnt work.

sayin'