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tofuhero

LOS ANGELES/CA
Joined: 04/24/07
Posts: 641

September 2nd, 2008 - 11:32 PM

yup

lipsticnbruises

GOLETA/CA
Joined: 04/28/08
Posts: 165

September 2nd, 2008 - 11:36 PM

will you? I'd love that.

todger

HUNTINGTON BEACH/CA
Joined: 11/14/07
Posts: 2246

September 2nd, 2008 - 11:38 PM

I WANT THIS SO BADD

pescha

Stockholm, SWEDEN
Joined: 04/24/07
Posts: 2592

September 2nd, 2008 - 11:39 PM

x

discostu

Montreal
Joined: 04/24/07
Posts: 19901

September 2nd, 2008 - 11:41 PM

OK

tofuhero

LOS ANGELES/CA
Joined: 04/24/07
Posts: 641

September 2nd, 2008 - 11:59 PM

lipsticnbruises

skin, smiles, the car lurches on for miles
blanched from the sun or the basement
lips that look like wine or a wino
i saw your eyes, crazy and wild
tearing up the room like an orphaned child
sunglasses and desert smiles
or sandcastle desert denial

cicada

ST. JAMES INFIRMARY
Joined: 04/24/07
Posts: 7131

September 2nd, 2008 - 11:59 PM

OH YES.

lipsticnbruises

GOLETA/CA
Joined: 04/28/08
Posts: 165

September 3rd, 2008 - 12:03 AM

tofuhero Said:

lipsticnbruises

skin, smiles, the car lurches on for miles
blanched from the sun or the basement
lips that look like wine or a wino
i saw your eyes, crazy and wild
tearing up the room like an orphaned child
sunglasses and desert smiles
or sandcastle desert denial

Thank you :)

tofuhero

LOS ANGELES/CA
Joined: 04/24/07
Posts: 641

September 3rd, 2008 - 12:10 AM

todger

the air seems thin up here
on the rooftop
thinner fingers, untossled moptop
it went with the seasons
and you went with your reasons
so i stare into spaces to find your traces
and lean on pieces of metal and an engine
which is a good replacement for you and your decision

todger

HUNTINGTON BEACH/CA
Joined: 11/14/07
Posts: 2246

September 3rd, 2008 - 12:23 AM

TEARS HAVE BEEN SHED

tofuhero

LOS ANGELES/CA
Joined: 04/24/07
Posts: 641

September 3rd, 2008 - 12:24 AM

pescha

eyes like a lake, eyes like a sea
reflecting pool and drowning me
as you smile in the snow
you even make the air wet
as you narrow your eyes
and blow smoke in god's eyes
you're an ocean without a floor
or do we only see the iceberg
and reach for the door?

tofuhero

LOS ANGELES/CA
Joined: 04/24/07
Posts: 641

September 3rd, 2008 - 12:51 AM

discostu

am I a tale of two cities
when i look at myself
i feel like a french novel
indulging vulgarities
like a drunkard genius debaser
breathe it in, print it out
i'm a museum full of private parts
all arranged to play the part
of someone I would rather not

Cynthia

Montréal
Joined: 04/24/07
Posts: 2692

September 3rd, 2008 - 1:07 AM

xxx

tofuhero

LOS ANGELES/CA
Joined: 04/24/07
Posts: 641

September 3rd, 2008 - 1:12 AM

cicada

i dug for miles
looked for sunset hair
and jigsaw smiles
but i only found fossils
your postcard wilds
and mountains tall as legs
and pushing down heads
whores, nuns, and Jameson
i feel a bit ashamed

tofuhero

LOS ANGELES/CA
Joined: 04/24/07
Posts: 641

September 3rd, 2008 - 1:39 AM

gnashing of teeth
and double-helix hair
if you got punched you in the nose
would it light up like Rudolph?
or would it bleed like lambs on the Pentacost?

who takes off the makeup when no one is around?
a butterfly taking flight
or a lonely, sad little clown?

tofuhero

LOS ANGELES/CA
Joined: 04/24/07
Posts: 641

September 3rd, 2008 - 1:39 AM

^ that was for Cynthia

deadiwellmaybe

KANSAS CITY/MO
Joined: 12/31/07
Posts: 244

September 3rd, 2008 - 1:53 AM

i don't know you but i would like one.

tofuhero

LOS ANGELES/CA
Joined: 04/24/07
Posts: 641

September 3rd, 2008 - 2:26 AM

deadiwellmaybe

naked and free
arms legs hips and thighs
all stretched out like summer skies

naked and free
you stand in the middle
and above
like angels and doves

is it better to climb up or fall down?
grasping for rocks and kicking down frowns
and all the fleshy fleshy sounds

EnderWiggin

LAKE FOREST/CA
Joined: 04/24/07
Posts: 8508

September 3rd, 2008 - 2:29 AM

Gay me up, homie.

deadiwellmaybe

KANSAS CITY/MO
Joined: 12/31/07
Posts: 244

September 3rd, 2008 - 2:30 AM

thank you

tofuhero

LOS ANGELES/CA
Joined: 04/24/07
Posts: 641

September 3rd, 2008 - 3:21 AM

EnderWiggin

in the hallway where she used to walk
"hello dear"
became "hello fear"
staring into the bathroom
waiting for a vampire,
or an icicle moon
a portrait of losing you soon
i'm taking pictures
and looking for bite marks
and an overbearing vampire with a love for the dark
a tattooed, bloodflow holocaust

youth

GAITHERSBURG/MD
Joined: 04/24/07
Posts: 2198

September 3rd, 2008 - 3:29 AM

oh wow
me please :)

elizaelectric

NEW YORK/NY
Joined: 07/05/07
Posts: 3768

September 3rd, 2008 - 3:57 AM

Brett you are awesome
yes please

tofuhero

LOS ANGELES/CA
Joined: 04/24/07
Posts: 641

September 3rd, 2008 - 4:30 AM

youth

one wise man brings spices
a cold night, a warm bed, and warmer vices
mattress acrobatics
or back-seat animatics
underscore the nature of a summer day
eyes that stare and hair that leads the flock astray
seatbelt curves and seatbelt ways
rivers drip down like sap from a crown
a whip-lashed haze in a clenched fist maze
or a smile and the letting down

pescha

Stockholm, SWEDEN
Joined: 04/24/07
Posts: 2592

September 3rd, 2008 - 5:16 AM

tofuhero Said:

pescha

eyes like a lake, eyes like a sea
reflecting pool and drowning me
as you smile in the snow
you even make the air wet
as you narrow your eyes
and blow smoke in god's eyes
you're an ocean without a floor
or do we only see the iceberg
and reach for the door?

:D

tofuhero

LOS ANGELES/CA
Joined: 04/24/07
Posts: 641

September 3rd, 2008 - 5:36 AM

elizaelectric

lips like the edge of the moon
and eyes that shine down on everything
like sirens and their screaming
the stark wails of dreaming
for love that hides like an eclipse
on days that last like the day he left
and days that you felt weak
like the City you love when the sky turns bleak

and then a smile, the dawn, and a friend
says, "Babe, this is not the end."
just let that start setting in.

innocentlust

ALBANY/NY
Joined: 04/24/07
Posts: 1988

September 3rd, 2008 - 6:34 AM

ohyes

Church

Hordaland,Bergen/Long beach,California
Joined: 06/23/08
Posts: 1665

September 3rd, 2008 - 7:35 AM

Me!

carly_cat

Calgary
Joined: 04/24/07
Posts: 488

September 3rd, 2008 - 8:38 AM

me please

cat_scat

FAYETTEVILLE/AR
Joined: 04/24/07
Posts: 1477

September 3rd, 2008 - 8:42 AM

xss

tofuhero

LOS ANGELES/CA
Joined: 04/24/07
Posts: 641

September 3rd, 2008 - 9:35 AM

i'll do any others when i get home from work. keep postin

nikkisneakers

NEW YORK/NY
Joined: 01/28/08
Posts: 1845

September 3rd, 2008 - 9:39 AM

x

Nadbash

MANCHESTER/NH
Joined: 04/24/07
Posts: 8797

September 3rd, 2008 - 10:00 AM

Go for it.

thecabbler

sudbury
Joined: 02/19/08
Posts: 1160

September 3rd, 2008 - 12:02 PM

i need this like a crackhead needs a hit

Cynthia

Montréal
Joined: 04/24/07
Posts: 2692

September 3rd, 2008 - 3:30 PM

thank you!

elizaelectric

NEW YORK/NY
Joined: 07/05/07
Posts: 3768

September 3rd, 2008 - 3:50 PM

tofuhero Said:

elizaelectric

lips like the edge of the moon
and eyes that shine down on everything
like sirens and their screaming
the stark wails of dreaming
for love that hides like an eclipse
on days that last like the day he left
and days that you felt weak
like the City you love when the sky turns bleak

and then a smile, the dawn, and a friend
says, "Babe, this is not the end."
just let that start setting in.

*swoon*

cicada

ST. JAMES INFIRMARY
Joined: 04/24/07
Posts: 7131

September 3rd, 2008 - 7:24 PM

<3

(also, wyoming has internet...HAY YAY!)

emilectrique

WOODBRIDGE/VA
Joined: 04/24/07
Posts: 4687

September 3rd, 2008 - 7:49 PM

lay it

gravytrain009

BROOKLYN/NY
Joined: 04/24/07
Posts: 4965

September 3rd, 2008 - 8:09 PM

please?

tofuhero

LOS ANGELES/CA
Joined: 04/24/07
Posts: 641

September 3rd, 2008 - 11:34 PM

innocentlust

i stare like an owl
and smile like a chicken
when you're around
i'm looking down
and see the sky ripple by
through a bird bath
and through the looking glass
as you drive on by

i've got two feet in and nowhere to stand
on the warm concrete or in the motel room
documenting one night stands with cheap perfume
so either fall in the deep end
and take my FUCKING hand
or i'll blow you like a bubble on a one-way trip
to a stark stark sun and nothing grand

makes

OCEANSIDE/CA
Joined: 08/25/08
Posts: 400

September 3rd, 2008 - 11:36 PM

if this is still going on, i want in

sliced_up

PHOENIX/AZ
Joined: 04/24/07
Posts: 3710

September 3rd, 2008 - 11:45 PM

i would like one of these

XtakemeawayX

BURBANK/CA
Joined: 04/24/07
Posts: 6771

September 3rd, 2008 - 11:53 PM

x3

girlnamedbrigid

SIERRA VISTA/AZ
Joined: 04/24/07
Posts: 2756

September 4th, 2008 - 12:09 AM

YES PLEASE!!!

tofuhero

LOS ANGELES/CA
Joined: 04/24/07
Posts: 641

September 4th, 2008 - 12:31 AM

Church

time stretches out like a foghorn
and bitterness
and the shirt you wore too much
as i stare into the mist with skullcap on
or is it smoke?
i'm on my last cigarette and my last bit of hope
walking down streets that curve and bend
like places on you i'd rest at the day's end
or when we'd sin
i think i need a drink
or a leering girl named Bergen
that smells like liquor, cloves and the sea
and a stiff drink called The Norwegian Kid
that sounds a bit like me
whatever warms me through the winter snow
until then, i'll be down below

tofuhero

LOS ANGELES/CA
Joined: 04/24/07
Posts: 641

September 4th, 2008 - 1:12 AM

carly_cat

this face is my uniform
and these cats are my hounds
long whiskers and eyelash curls
quiet moments and another round
i sometimes watch you from my window
and tonight you're the bug i have to pounce
drag you back to my room
and i'll bat you around for a while
but it's hard to even move an ounce
when you size me up and stare me down
stroking up and down
and it just sits and i stare
naked in the paint and my underwear
so i'll go back to my room
and pretend it turned out right
where the wild things are
and i wish you were tonight

tofuhero

LOS ANGELES/CA
Joined: 04/24/07
Posts: 641

September 4th, 2008 - 1:40 AM

cat_scat

you feel like murder
or a cadaver
and a knife that twists as the hours pass
with deep-set eyes
that kidnap every bit of light
and transcribe every second she's not here tonight
but then you illustrate how not to cry
as you laugh off the tears
someone obviously planted in your eyes

xxxcelicaxxx

Paris
Joined: 04/24/07
Posts: 11055

September 4th, 2008 - 4:45 AM

i would love one too.
xo

tofuhero

LOS ANGELES/CA
Joined: 04/24/07
Posts: 641

September 4th, 2008 - 6:28 AM

nikkisneakers

stretched out six ways to sunday
and you're still deadpan drunk
halfway to monday
from too much liquor, beer
and this whole damn year

your eyes are like scalpels
that cut to the chase
with all the scoundrels
you serve and you smile
but they fall like leaves
and you don't fall for anything,
anyone
that could have been here to greet the sun
with pawing paw paws
or snoring saw saws

benign neglect
you drape the chair like a velvet dress
with skin like angels
curves like the devil
breaths of cigarette
and no one can afford you yet
you and your delicate mess
all stiff drinks and marks of the night
and still alone at the break of light

tofuhero

LOS ANGELES/CA
Joined: 04/24/07
Posts: 641

September 4th, 2008 - 6:38 AM

sorry that's all for now, i'll do more later. i promise i'll get to everyone on the list though.